Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus science, technology and business.-Ielts writing task-2 2023

• Why do you think that is ?
• what could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

Introduction

In this globalized world, Art is one of the important ways to recognize and understand the lifestyle and beliefs of any country and its people. But nowadays, Art is not given importance as compared to fast growing Technology and Science. The main reason behind this could be insecurity of job in arts. However, if people get to know the benefits of arts, they would be interested in it.

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In the world of showiness, if you have money you have a good status in the Society. And to make this process continue, people like to work in science and technological fields. People believe their future is safe when they have job at such places. This technical work can make them more money in comparison to traditional art. Businesses are growing day by day and more and more people are connecting with them because of a good amount of income which they may not get in Arts. For example, people, who work in business or in technical field, are going to get a handsome salary at the end of the month. On the other side, people, who sell their paintings, have money only when the painting is sold out. This is the main reason of diminishing popularity of art. Nowadays, people are more friendly in using electronic gadgets and they find it really easy to work on computer than to draw a picture. 10 out of 10 people know how to use computer. On the contrary, only one person out of 10 might know how to draw a picture. In contemporary world, we are surrounded by Science and Technology and it is hard to imagine our lives without these gadgets. As a result, art is losing its value.

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Government should take initiatives to protect art before it becomes non existing thing. Government should work with some organizations who can combine technical work with traditional art. Moreover, this fusion should be teaching in school and colleges so that students take interest at early age and can decide to make their future in this. Apart from this, government should release some shows in which people, who got over from their depression because of art, would share their stories how art helped them in being happy after pouring their pain, emotions and experience in the art. So, these shows help people knowing the importance of art.

Conclusion

To conclude, indeed money is important to live a luxurious life, art is also important  to express our thoughts and feelings.

Vocabulary

1. Depreciate  – to become less valuable over a period of time
2. Diminish – to become or to make something become smaller, weaker, etc.
3. Friendly – that is helpful and easy to use
4. Fusion – to process or result of joining two or more things together to form one  
5. Luxurious – very comfortable; containing expensive and enjoyable things
6. Relief – the act of removing or reducing pain, anxiety, etc.

Intro Idea

Art reflects our feelings, beliefs, thoughts and experience and that is how we get to know about the culture and lifestyle of people across the world. In this fast growing world,  People are busy in growing their businesses and finding new innovations. That’s is why art is Losing its value and not appreciated by a good number of people. The root cause for this is people believe it is not a good source in a monetary way in the long run. However, taking some steps to encourage youth can change the perspective of people.

Conclusion Idea

In conclusion, after a stressful day at working in technology and business, one may need relief and art can give them that opportunity to show what the feel through their art.